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Monday 27 July 2015

My Reading follow up

 Walt: Order and retell the story again in your own words.the first person that found the coin was Ruru .then Weta came along because Something round and shiny crashed into the grass beside him. Then he said  what this? Then the kiwi came and noticed that something was moving in the Grass.Then he said this looks like dinner.Then the next thing was that the kiwi pick the coin up and tried to eat the coin but it was to hard.Then he dropped it and then the Kiore picked it up and said lovingly stroking the coin. “And it’s all mine.
One thing that i learnt from the story was that Turei left the coin on the windowsill
But he didn't noticed that the window was open . next min-tine 
the Owl came and took it then it slipped out of his claws . The Two Dollar was shiny from marama.


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