my Nepal writing

During and after the earthquake in Nepal, all the people were in shocked and terrified. Over 5000 people have lost their lives. Once the earthquake started all the people gathered  on the streets.Some people were so frightened that they hung onto the bars and the gates, where people parked their cars.

Lots of buildings were destroyed from the earthquake. Most people were anxious because they lost their homes and they had no where to live. Homes were destroyed from the earthquake and  now thousands of people have to sleep on the streets.  Some inside tents. people were panicking and scared incase there were aftershocks.