First try

Walt: Write introductions that orientate and hook in my audience

FIRST TRY This term team 4 is  learning about trade and enterprise.Trade and enterprise is something when you make your project and you sell it .Did you know that my group is trying to work hard to make air fresheners? So come along and buy a air freshener for only 1pt.

WITH A ? This term team 4 is  learning about trade and enterprise .Trade and enterprise is something when you make your project and you sell it. Did you know that my group is trying to work hard to make air fresheners , so come along and buy a air freshener for only 1pt ?

WITH A ! This term team 4 is  learning about trade and enterprise .Trade and enterprise is something when you make your project and you sell it .Did you know that my group is trying to

work hard to make air fresheners , so come  along ! ,and buy a air freshener for only 1pt.

FACTS This term team 4 is  learning about trade and enterprise .Trade and enterprise is something when you make your project and you sell it .Did you know that my group is trying to work hard to make air fresheners , so come along and buy a air freshener for only 1pt. Pieces is like cents and PTS is like dollars.”Wow” did you know that homeware is selling amazing stuff like candles , air fresheners , and soap.

We are learning to do a introduction about trade and enterprise.
This term we are using own own fake money and it's called PTS and Pieces.