WALT: write an introduction that orientates and hooks in the reader.
Room 8 was making butter with fresh cream and a little bit of salt.Have you made homemade butter before ? “Wow” did you know that this morning it was really awesome , because we get to make homemade butter.We only get to take 2 shakes then 4 shakes.
Guest what did you know that you can make butter with 100% best cream and a little bit of salt ? That's so easy right. Did you know that Room 8 literacy made homemade butter it was nice and delicious
Yum ! Tasting homemade butter that’s really delicious . Room 8 literacy get to taste homemade butter with fresh bread , It taste like normal butter.
Homemade butter is really delicious . My favourite part was when Room 8 literacy class was shaking the jar so that the cream can get thick.
You are thinking about how to hook your audience in, I can tell. Read back over your introduction when you have written it to check that the sentences are clear for others to understand. It is ok to fix things up later.
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