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Thursday 15 October 2015

My Holiday Writing

Guest what? It was school holidays and it was cool. On Saturday  I went to the Mangere Pools with my cousins and my brothers and  sisters.  We went to the pools because it was too hot , We went in my aunty car and her name is Riva . In the car there was  only six seats and there was nine people that can’t fit in the car.   At the pools there was a small volcano and a slide.

the first week I went to my uncle's house for the night.My uncles name is Adrian And he lives in manakau . When I  arrive to my uncle’s house I played on his play station three. The game that I played was Halo 3 it was boring because you have to shoot monsters and people. So then I went to my mum and asked for her my tablet. I played Rail Rush.When I was playing on the tablet I got 150 nuggets and one egg.So when I click the egg I had 500 nuggets so I have 650 nuggets.


On the second week I went to the pools with my cousin’s and my two brothers.When I arrive We all rushed inside the pool and played touch with my uncle , After that I had “lunch”.I had hot chips and ham sandwiches. After I finished I got changed in the girls room.After that I went to countdown and got a just juice.Later on we decided to go home and play on the xbox 360.


On the Last day I went to my aunt's and uncle's  house to play with my cousin Sina. We had a water fight with the water balloons.We bought 3 packets of
water balloons and When We had a water fight we started to play tag with my brother a.My brother’s name is Sam and he is 14 years old and he goes to Tamaki college.


My favourite part was when I went to the pools. One thing that I enjoyed the most was spending time with my Uncle Adrian. I hope next time is that my mum could take me to paint ball.  Image result for mangere pools

1 comment:

  1. Hi,Jennifer I love your writing but you have some mistakes.

    From your bes friend,Sheena.

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