Jennifer L
This blog is a record of my learning during the time I was at Pt England School.
Thursday, 17 March 2016
hook practice
Today Me and My hold class have been doing a presentation about Hooking Your Audience
I been writhing about how. you make a really good story.
Wednesday, 16 March 2016
Writing about a hook
this week my literacy is learning about putting an hook inside a writing.Well I made one with my narrative writing about volcanoes. So my hook that I choose to write is a Question.
Have you ever heard about volcanoes? Well there are hundreds of volcanoes around the world and one day 2 boys and one girl went to a volcano in 1956 of feb 30th.Their names are robert and sam and julie.When Julie and sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hunging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said “I’m here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after.
Have you ever heard about volcanoes? Well there are hundreds of volcanoes around the world and one day 2 boys and one girl went to a volcano in 1956 of feb 30th.Their names are robert and sam and julie.When Julie and sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hunging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said “I’m here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after.
Tuesday, 15 March 2016
Problem Solving Week 4 - term 1
WALT: solve unknown problems using addition/subtraction strategies that we know.
Thursday, 3 March 2016
Taupo
Walt: identify the main ideas in the text by using a variety of strategies.
Jack - Jack Attack
Today my group is learning about Tops and tops stands for T for Title O for Orientation so that When
Where What Who P for problem S because Solution
Where What Who P for problem S because Solution
Tuesday, 1 March 2016
Mt Eden
Walt: find specific evidence in a text.
Narrative TOPS
Today my group is learning about Tops and tops stands for T for Title O for Orientation so that When
Where What Who P for problem S because Solution.
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