Writing about a hook

  this week my literacy is learning about putting an hook inside a writing.Well I made one with my narrative writing about volcanoes. So my hook that I choose to write is a Question.

Have you ever heard about volcanoes? Well there are hundreds of volcanoes around the world and one day 2 boys and one girl went to a volcano in 1956 of feb 30th.Their names are robert and sam and julie.When Julie and sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hunging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said “I’m here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after. 

Jack - Jack Attack

Today my group is learning about Tops and tops stands for T for Title O for Orientation so that When
Where What Who  P for problem S because Solution

Mt Eden

 Walt: find specific evidence in a text.

narrative writing

Once upon time there once were  2 boys and one girl who went to a volcano in  1956 of feb 30th.Their names are Robert and Sam and Julie. When Julie and Sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hanging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said  “I'm here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after.

My Narrative Writing

Once upon time there once were 2 boys and one girl who went to a volcano in 1956 of Feb  30Th. Their names are Robert and Sam and Julie.When Julie and Sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hanging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said “I'm here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after.

Mount Smart

Walt: find specific evidence in a text

Rangitoto poster

this is facts about the volcano called Rangitoto. One thing that I know is that Rangitoto means " bloody sky ".

Merry Christmas

 I  Just want to say Wish you a merry Christmas and a happy holidays 

Statistics

WALT: study information (data), collect it, summarise and present it

 

Our maths class have been learning about Statistics. Statistics is when you gather information to find things out. First I had to create a Google form. Then I got my friends to fill it out. Using spreadsheet, I created my graph. 

in my class 7 people liked Ariana Grande. Six people voted for Jessie J. Only 2 people liked Nicky minja.

Next time, I would like to find out about more information

My Limerick poem

WALT:write a Limerick poem

One thing that I learnt about this poem is that we have to use 8 or 9  also 5 and 6 syllables.
my second thing that I learnt was that we have to rhyme the words.

diamante poem

Walt: Write a diamante poem using nouns, verbs, adjectives, synonyms and antonyms

my follow up

Walt: solve multiplication and division problems using more than one strategy
 one thing that I learnt was that 5 x 9 = 45  because 9+9+9+9+9 = 45. The second thing that I learnt was that 6 x 6 = 36 because 6+6+6+6+6+6=36

Report Writing

Today I’m writing about a short tailed bat. A short tailed bat is a New Zealand native animal.

Habitat:

Did you know that a short tailed bat lives in native forests in New Zealand.They roost in large, hollow trees and the caves. Sometimes they live alone and sometimes in colonies. They mostly live in the South Island and a little bit in the  North Island.

description:

A short tailed bat is the same size as a person’s thumb. They have sharp claws  sharp teeth also a strange nose. Short tailed bats are coloured in mousy grey colour.  They have  a large pointy ears that’s brown and  they have wings . the short tailed bat has thick fur

Diet :

A short tailed bat likes to eat insects like  flies and moths. They also eat flowers , fruits and nectar. beetles and  pollen.

characteristics :

The short tailed bat is a  nocturnal and  some of  the short tailed bats is the only member of the family. They hunt their prey using scent, passive hearing. A short tailed bats spend only around 30%  catching insects in the air.One Fact that I know was that a short tailed bat weigh around 12 - 15 grams.

follow up

  Walt: Find and research facts about the Kakapo one fact that I learnt about this story is that the kakapo looks for food.My second fact is that The kakapo lives in codfish island in the south Island.

follow up

Walt: solve multiplication and division problems using more than one strategy One thing that I learnt was that 32 divided by 4 = 8.because 8 +8+8+8=32.

My Holiday Writing

Guest what? It was school holidays and it was cool. On Saturday  I went to the Mangere Pools with my cousins and my brothers and  sisters.  We went to the pools because it was too hot , We went in my aunty car and her name is Riva . In the car there was  only six seats and there was nine people that can’t fit in the car.   At the pools there was a small volcano and a slide.

the first week I went to my uncle's house for the night.My uncles name is Adrian And he lives in manakau . When I  arrive to my uncle’s house I played on his play station three. The game that I played was Halo 3 it was boring because you have to shoot monsters and people. So then I went to my mum and asked for her my tablet. I played Rail Rush.When I was playing on the tablet I got 150 nuggets and one egg.So when I click the egg I had 500 nuggets so I have 650 nuggets.

On the second week I went to the pools with my cousin’s and my two brothers.When I arrive We all rushed inside the pool and played touch with my uncle , After that I had “lunch”.I had hot chips and ham sandwiches. After I finished I got changed in the girls room.After that I went to countdown and got a just juice.Later on we decided to go home and play on the xbox 360.

On the Last day I went to my aunt's and uncle's  house to play with my cousin Sina. We had a water fight with the water balloons.We bought 3 packets of

water balloons and When We had a water fight we started to play tag with my brother a.My brother’s name is Sam and he is 14 years old and he goes to Tamaki college.

My favourite part was when I went to the pools. One thing that I enjoyed the most was spending time with my Uncle Adrian. I hope next time is that my mum could take me to paint ball.  

The lifecycle of a skink

Walt: Use the text to help us answer questions accurately
One thing that I learn't was that mokomoko is a native animal.My second thing that I learn't was that  native means belonging to or originally from a place.

My follow up

Walt: learn our 6s, 7s and 8s timetables to help us solve harder word number problems 
One thing that I learnt was that the problems that we solve was timetables. My second thing was that 4 x 18 = 72 because 4x10 = 40 4 x 8 = 32 then add 40 +32 = 72

my follow up

WALT: Solve fraction problems using my knowledge of my timetables or divided by's One thing that I learnt was that fractions are like 1/3 1/4 . Today Exponents learnt about fractions.

My follow up

 WALT: Retell the story again in our own words 


Today buzzy bees learnt about Finders keepers and the hidden message was the finders isn't always keepers .

One thing that  learnt was that  Mary was very selfish also mean. Mary thought that mum was nuts and Mary was very mean and selfish but when mum told her that Finders isn't keepers then she rang kaumatua at the marae .