hook practice

Today Me and My hold class have been doing a presentation about Hooking Your Audience
I been writhing about how. you make a really good story.

Writing about a hook

  this week my literacy is learning about putting an hook inside a writing.Well I made one with my narrative writing about volcanoes. So my hook that I choose to write is a Question.

Have you ever heard about volcanoes? Well there are hundreds of volcanoes around the world and one day 2 boys and one girl went to a volcano in 1956 of feb 30th.Their names are robert and sam and julie.When Julie and sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hunging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said “I’m here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after. 

Problem Solving Week 4 - term 1

WALT: solve unknown problems using addition/subtraction strategies that we know. 

Taupo

 Walt: identify the main ideas in the text by using a variety of strategies.

Jack - Jack Attack

Today my group is learning about Tops and tops stands for T for Title O for Orientation so that When
Where What Who  P for problem S because Solution

Mt Eden

 Walt: find specific evidence in a text.

Narrative TOPS

Today my group is learning about Tops and tops stands for T for Title O for Orientation so that When
Where What Who  P for problem S because Solution.

narrative writing

Once upon time there once were  2 boys and one girl who went to a volcano in  1956 of feb 30th.Their names are Robert and Sam and Julie. When Julie and Sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hanging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said  “I'm here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after.

solving maths problems.

Problem 1: WALT: Add numbers with tens and ones, over 10

My group has been solving maths problems.

My Narrative Writing

Once upon time there once were 2 boys and one girl who went to a volcano in 1956 of Feb  30Th. Their names are Robert and Sam and Julie.When Julie and Sam went to find something to eat. Robert decided to jump off the volcano.But lucky there was a long stick that was hanging.So Robert hung on to the stick about 1 hour. After 1 hour Sam and Julie arrived. Than Julie said to Sam “ where’s Robert ” she shouted. Then Robert shouted and said “I'm here help me”. So Julie and Sam help him up and then they had Something to eat .So they Live happily ever after.

Problem solving : Week 1 term 1

Walt:Add two numbers together
one thing that I've learn't was that 22 + 75 = 97

20 + 70 = 90

     2 + 5 = 7.

Mount Smart

Walt: find specific evidence in a text

Duffy Theatre

Guest what? did you know that On Monday of 9Th of February on 2015 there was a Duffy Theatre show,in the School hall.

At the show We learn’t about how to read.The mum was speaking in Samoan to the daughter. When Duffy was in the library where he was borrowing some books. The library  lady was acting like  a fairy she  started to sing  and said Tinka Tinka Tinka Tinka la la la”.My Favourite part that I really enjoy is when the man was acting like a baby.

One thing that I like about this is that you get to learn how to read books.

Rangitoto poster

this is facts about the volcano called Rangitoto. One thing that I know is that Rangitoto means " bloody sky ".